tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4948305867136748138.post2089517844268341681..comments2024-03-29T16:49:19.479+05:30Comments on दिल का दर्पण: हाईकूMohinder56http://www.blogger.com/profile/02273041828671240448noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4948305867136748138.post-3861352543944080302012-01-12T16:16:00.384+05:302012-01-12T16:16:00.384+05:30सभी हाइकू लाजवाब ... कुछ ही पंक्तियों में सार लिख ...सभी हाइकू लाजवाब ... कुछ ही पंक्तियों में सार लिख दिया ...दिगम्बर नासवाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11793607017463281505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4948305867136748138.post-2360737008904361042012-01-12T12:33:22.570+05:302012-01-12T12:33:22.570+05:30behad sundar likha hai aapne.
very nice.
welcome.behad sundar likha hai aapne.<br />very nice.<br />welcome.Jeevan Pushphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15866178821083740220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4948305867136748138.post-23200964714537189332012-01-12T12:16:45.423+05:302012-01-12T12:16:45.423+05:30वाह..बहुत बढि़यावाह..बहुत बढि़यासदाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10937633163616873911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4948305867136748138.post-45393906331230452322012-01-12T08:49:11.231+05:302012-01-12T08:49:11.231+05:30बहुत सुन्दर भाव...
मगर कुछ में आपने 5-7-5 का नियम ...बहुत सुन्दर भाव...<br />मगर कुछ में आपने 5-7-5 का नियम नहीं रखा है जो हायेकु की विशेषता है..<br />घडी के कांटे<br />टिक टिक टिक टिक<br />बीता जीवन<br /><br />..."टिक टिक करते" ---ऐसा कर दें.<br /><br />कृपया मेरी टिप्पणी को अन्यथा ना लें..vidyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07319211419560198769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4948305867136748138.post-21274043180610822222012-01-12T05:44:04.134+05:302012-01-12T05:44:04.134+05:30gagar me sagar. bahut bahut sundar prayas. badhai....gagar me sagar. bahut bahut sundar prayas. badhai.मो. कमरूद्दीन शेख ( QAMAR JAUNPURI )https://www.blogger.com/profile/13575519013876254297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4948305867136748138.post-13479105990431944692012-01-11T09:51:39.691+05:302012-01-11T09:51:39.691+05:30bahut umda haiku.bahut pasand aaye.bahut umda haiku.bahut pasand aaye.Rajesh Kumarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04052797854888522201noreply@blogger.com